Pray For Me–Another Story From the Kings River

It was early afternoon, and we’d just finished lunch. Wanting to do nothing more than read our books and enjoy the beautiful scenery, Scott carried our chairs down to the edge of the Kings River. I followed, books and little Tufa in hand.

We looked at the river for a while, then settled into our chairs. Tufa promptly fell asleep in my lap, and I just as promptly got engrossed in the book I’d brought specially for this trip, The Inn at Corbies’ Caww  by Verlyn Flieger. Scott settled into his chair with Cat’s Cradle by Kurt Vonnegut.

He tells me he felt them before he saw them. “Something calling me,” he says, “kind of like a sound on the breeze.” He turned around and gazed at a redwood tree so tall, so ancient that it tickled the clouds before sending them, laughing, on their way across the sky.

And he saw what was calling him: two sets of prayer beads, blowing in the wind.

We walked over to the tree to take a closer look. They looked very old, as if they had hung there for more than one circle of the seasons. Their cords were frayed, fragile.

I suggested Scott take the beads with him. “I think they’re a gift from the Universe,” I told him. But he disagreed. He thought they were there for a reason, as an offering to all who wandered by.

They were his discovery, not mine. They spoke to him, not me. I left them hanging on the tree, where we found them.

Later, when we returned home, Scott wrote a beautiful poem about his experience with the prayer beads. I am honored he agreed to share his work with my blog readers. Here is his poem:

Pray for me
by Scott Zeidel

Two weathered rosaries
dangle from an ancient redwood tree
overlooking a mountain river.
One, wooden, with a cross pendant;
the other, plastic, with a transparent disk.

The horizontal beam of the cross
is broken, missing,
now scattered in the breeze.
The sad shadow of a deity
is burned in it,
crying from breathing the pain
of those who have wandered by.

The second pendant,
like a Medieval icon,
has an etching of a flower
swirling around the words,
“Pray for me.”

A plea among trees,
under clouds,
to an angel,
to nature.

I decide to leave the rosaries behind,
swinging,
silent,
as they had before.

And wander by.

* * *

My Scott, guitar in hand

For those of you who wish to put a face to the name, here’s a photo of Scott. A poet by avocation, he is, by trade, an adjunct professor of music at Mt. San Antonio Community College in Walnut, CA, and a gifted classical guitarist. In his off time during the summer months, he is a prolific tomato farmer in our little backyard garden. Here he is, in front of the tomatoes, guitar in hand. If you could hold a poem, he’d have that in hand, too.

* * *

Please take the time to check out Smoky’s books at the link above, as well as further explore her Website. If you’re on Facebook, you can like her author page by clicking the link on the right; if you’re on Twitter, you can follow her by clicking the Twitter link. She follows back.

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About Smoky Zeidel

Smoky Zeidel is an author whose deep connection to nature is apparent in all she writes. She is the author of three novels, a short story collection, and three works of nonfiction. When not writing or exploring nature, Smoky spends time gardening, camping, meditating, and resisting the urge to speak in haiku.
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23 Responses to Pray For Me–Another Story From the Kings River

  1. But he IS holding the poems. They’re right there, behind the twinkle in his eyes.

  2. Smoky Zeidel says:

    But of course you are right, Kat. 8-)

  3. We may never know for whom the beads were intended, though they spoke to you, and now Scott speaks well of them to us, and they remain for the next seeker on the path who will also be inspired.

    Malcolm

  4. SCOTT ZEIDEL says:

    Yes, Malcolm, they are inspiring. Thank you! And they also have another purpose: to breath in pain of all who wander by.

  5. j.e.glaze says:

    wonderful poem, Scott. and an experience to which you were called. pray for me.
    how long has it been since someone prayed for me? I do not know.
    thanks for sharing this, Smoky, and Scott, my friends.

  6. Smoky Zeidel says:

    You are always in my prayers, John Boy–you and the other dear friends I have who are so far away. You inspire me with your photographs and your poetry; how could I not pray for you?

  7. SCOTT ZEIDEL says:

    Thank you so much, John! You know, I believe, someone prays for you every time you experience beauty. Every time, for example, you take one of your beautiful photos.

  8. Oh my, dear ones. Tears in these eyes as I read your poetry and love in your world. Pray for me in my troubled time.

    • SCOTT ZEIDEL says:

      Thank you so much, Charmaine!

    • Smoky Zeidel says:

      My husband is something special, he is. We are in perfect harmony when it comes to our feelings about Kings Canyon and the rest of Mother Earth.

      • joiceoverton says:

        Smoky…Scott looks very handsome and friendly…but my eyes go to the guitar since I play and teach guitar to children. I have several guitars, please relay to him that the one I play the most was owned by Buddy Holly and is an acoustic electric? I have been giving some of my guitars away to my grandsons, although it breaks my heart. I am older now and I have taught them and am so very proud of the beautiful way they play. joice

  9. T.K. Thorne says:

    Lovely Scott and Smoky. Thanks for sharing this encounter. We are all seekers.

  10. SCOTT ZEIDEL says:

    Yes we are seekers, Teresa! Glad you enjoyed the poem.

  11. Melinda says:

    So many questions…who left them? Why? Did they receive what they’d hoped for? Scott’s poem captures it all.

  12. Melinda says:

    You’re very welcome, Scott….and Smoky? I can’t help but think there’s a heck of a novel in there just waiting for you to write it. :-)

  13. I loved reading both the poem and your story about it. Thank you both.

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