How an African Intruder Taught Me a Lesson on Magic and Writing

We have a strange new critter in our neighborhood. For the past few weeks, a guineafowl has been roaming around our hillside, back and forth between our yard and our neighbor’s. We’ve named her Gertie.

Gertie

Gertie is an African bird, so we aren’t quite sure how she got here. Perhaps she escaped from a breeder. She doesn’t fly very well, so this seems unlikely. Perhaps she was dumped in the neighborhood. This, unfortunately, does seem likely. People who don’t live here in our hills think it is a public dumping ground, and we spend a lot of time and energy cleaning up other people’s messes. But how do you clean up a guineafowl?

She seems to have appeared as if by magic, and now, we’ve kind of fallen in love with her. She makes very strange noises, sounding alternately like a very squeaky bed and a goose being attacked by a hawk or something. And if you’ve ever doubted birds descended from dinosaurs, one look at Gertie is all it’ll take to convince you. She looks like a cross between a very large chicken and a blue Velociraptor.

All sorts of Gerties have popped up in my Work In Progress (WIP), The Storyteller’s Bracelet. Not guineafowl, these Gerties, but surprises that seem to have materialized out of nowhere. This shouldn’t surprise me as much as it does; the same thing happened when I wrote On the Choptank Shores and The Cabin.

But for some reason, these surprises are different. They are taking me into the realm of magical realism, something I experimented with in The Cabin, but which now has gone far beyond the experimental stage. And, quite frankly, I wasn’t sure I wanted this book to be classified as magical realism. I was aiming for historical romance. It contains a classic love triangle, one man and two women. He loves them both, they both love him. Both end up in serious trouble. He has to choose which one to save, and live the rest of his life dealing with the consequences.

My Storyteller's Bracelet

But then there was that pesky title item, the storyteller’s bracelet. I have one; it is what inspired me to write this book. And the bracelets—both the one in the book and the one I wear on my wrist every day as I write—seem to have magical properties I never imagined when I embarked on this writing adventure. My bracelet urges me on, makes me want to sit down and write each day. The bracelet in the story does the same thing, in a different way, to our hero.

Magic is everywhere in our world, if you just have the eyes to see it. I’m not talking illusions, which is what “magicians” like David Copperfield perform. Illusions are just that—a trick of the mind. Magic is what happens when an African bird appears out of nowhere in your Southern California yard. Magic is when bees pollinate your peach blossoms, and a few weeks later, fruit appears. As Malcolm Campbell wrote yesterday in his blog, Meditations on Seeds and Their Immense Journey, every single seed contains magic. Magic is when two People (and I capitalize that because I mean not only Humans, but Bear People, Otter People, Tree People, Lizard People, every Living Thing) come together, and a few months later, their offspring are born. Magic is when your best friend calls or emails you out of the blue just when you are feeling low and wishing she were there to comfort you. And, if you’re a writer like me, magic is when something unexpected pops up in your WIP, leading you down paths you did not expect to explore with your characters.

I’ve learned when magic enters your life, be it through an unexpected visitor from another continent or through your words, it is best to go with it. Magic is strong and best not be ignored.

And on that note, I think I best heed the magical call of my WIP. It is waiting to take me down a new path. I cannot wait to see what my characters and I discover today.

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In 100 Words–And the Winners Are…

What wonderful submissions I received in my 100-word flash fiction contest! I got many, many wonderful stories, and I want to thank everyone who participated. What really struck me was how many people, when submitting their stories, told me how much fun this challenge was. And it is! Writing 100-word stories is one of my favorite exercises.

While all the stories were good, the winners struck a particular chord with me. Here are the winners and honorable mentions:

First Place: Banaadiziwin, by Melinda Clayton

Melinda’s story takes the grand prize of a print copy of Smoky’s Writer’s Workshop Combo Set because of the wonderful way she wove setting description into such a short tale. It also leaves the reader with food for thought; it teaches a lesson. To be able to accomplish so much in a mere 100 words is astounding. Here is her fabulous, winning story:

Grasshopper pulls herself further back under the leaves of peppermint and milkweed, careful to hide from Osprey, who watches from high above in the branches of Black Spruce, and from Shrew, who rustles in the cattails beside the Big Water. Grasshopper listens to the sounds of Mishigamaa:  the gentle lapping of water against shore, the quiet swish of wind through grasses, the croak of Frog as he calls to his mate. And to other sounds, not of Mishigamaa:  rumbles and booms.  Grasshopper does not know these noisemakers by their names, bulldozer and jackhammer.  She only knows them as banaadiziwin.  Destruction.

Second Place: READY, by Christina Carson

The element of surprise Christina wove into her story delighted me. Christina wins an eBook copy of Smoky’s Writer’s Workshop Combo Set for her story:

“Ah, my little Grasshopper, what have you learned since we last met?”

It was difficult to hear the old man through the jackhammer throb of Hong Kong traffic. Worse yet, I had nothing to offer. Rather than train, I’d read books about Kung Fu while sipping peppermint tea and eating lotus-seed-filled buns. The old man waited; I knew he knew. If the teacher appears when the student is ready, what was wrong with me?

His open hand shot out like lightning, stopping just at my throat. “You think you live forever. You wrong. Ready now?”

I was more than ready.

HONORABLE MENTIONS

The following three stories win honorable mentions. No prizes, but the writers get bragging rights. None of these stories had titles.

By Kat Anderson: What I love about Kat’s story is the delightful twist that takes us from the he-man world of construction work in the big city to a kinder, gentler world when the character retreats to his home after a hard day’s work. Kat lost a point, though, for using the word mint instead of peppermint. (I know, picky picky. My contest; my rules!). Here is Kat’s fabulous story:

After a long day fighting the jackhammer in the middle of a busy city street, all Carlisle wanted was a nice, cold, smooth drink. From his place at the granite-topped kitchen island, he scanned the trail of grimy clothes that marked his path to the fridge. Sighing, he hit the blender to crush the ice, muddled the fresh mint he’d grabbed from the door garden, and poured in heavy cream and Hershey’s chocolate syrup; his version of a Grasshopper.

Flipping the stereo to Etta James, he settled into the hot tub. And there was peace once more in his world.

Joyce Norman submitted this delightfully humorous 100 worder. Joyce did a wonderful job of putting the reader inside the child’s head:

I sat on the curb, sucking on a peppermint candy. The sun was high and little rivers of perspiration made their way from under my Giants baseball cap. My dad had brought me to his job site earlier that morning but when I asked to touch the jackhammer he sent me to the curb – throwing a peppermint out in front of me, like he was saying, “Fetch ’es.”

Jackhammers stopped. Dad called my name. “Here. Hold tight onto this thing now or you’ll take off like a grasshopper, jumping all over the place.”

Oh, shit. I swallowed my candy whole.

Finally, Morgen Bailey gets an honorable mention (or since she’s British, an honourable mention!) for the humor in her short tale that sounds like it’s a tragedy. She lost a point, though, for using writing Jack Hammer as a name rather than jackhammer, one word. It was clever, true—but it sort of broke the rules. Here’s Morgen’s story:

I guess my favourite of my characters, protagonists anyway, would be Jack Hammer. Yes, as you can guess it’s a crime comedy. Take it while you can, I usually go ‘dark’. Children’s very occasionally – the latest was about a blue grasshopper called Graham. Liked peppermint tea. Write what they know, or so they say. So I shall do just that. Create a character from my hospital bed. Broken arms … broken legs … broken just about everything. Cute nurse says she’ll write it down. That’ll teach me to climb ivy, pretending to be Romeo. But what’s the fun in learning your lessons?

Many thanks to everyone who participated in this contest! I hope you’ll check out the other contest I have running currently, a reading contest. You can check out the rules here.

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Some Thoughts on Flash Fiction & Another Contest

Recently, I’ve seen a lot of blogs and contests out there that involve writing flash fiction. I even have taken the bait and had one of my pieces, “The Red-Haired Girl”, posted on the incredibly prolific Morgen Bailey’s Flash Fiction Friday blog. (I have decided that Morgen, by the way, is a conglomerate of clones. Either that, or she’s the only woman on the planet that never needs to sleep. Yes, she is that prolific, but I digress.)

I don’t think there is a firm definition of what constitutes flash fiction. Wikipedia describes it as being of “extreme brevity.” Other definitions on the Internet call it fiction of less than 1,000 words, or between 300–1,000 words.

I like Wiki’s definition; the other definitions seem long to me. I’ve been writing, and teaching, flash fiction long before it became so fashionable. And when I teach (and write) it, the stories are a mere 100 words long. Not around 100 words long; not about 100 words long. They are exactly 100 words. Not counting things like a title or the words, “The End.”

When I was teaching in a classroom, it always amazed me that I got some of my best stories out of my students in this exercise at brevity. When you’re writing a complete story in 100 words, you have to make each one count. There’s no room for extraneous adverbs, so verbs become stronger. Adjectives become a luxury, so writers must think hard to come up with a precise, perfect noun that needs to adjective to convey to the reader the picture the writer wishes to convey.

In short, a flash fiction story of 100 words is as much an exercise in editing as it is in writing. In fact, that is how I taught my students to write these stories. Write until your story is complete, without bothering to keep a precise word count, while remaining vaguely aware that 100 words is about the length of a seven- or eight-line paragraph. Then, go back and edit, edit edit! It’s far better to cut extra words than to pad a thin story.

In my book, Smoky’s Writer’s Workshop Combo Set, I have a dozen different exercises that have the reader write 100-word stories. Only, I make it a bit more challenging for them: I give them three words they must use. For example, “Write a short story in 100 words exactly, where peppermint, jackhammer, and grasshopper are three of those words.”

You know, that’s a great idea! Yeah, yeah, I have another contest running right now, but why not make this a contest, too? Here’s what you do: Write that flash fiction story in 100 words exactly where peppermint, jackhammer, and grasshopper are three of those words. Then, email me your stories. You have until Friday afternoon at noon Pacific Coast Time to send your stories. I’ll publish the best ones on this blog that afternoon. The person who, in my opinion, writes the best 100-word story will receive a print copy of Smoky’s Writer’s Workshop Combo Set. Yes, that’s right: I’m giving away a print copy of this book to the author of the best 100-word flash fiction submitted. Second prize: a eBook copy of Smoky’s Writer’s Workshop Combo Set, downloaded from Smashwords in any format the winner chooses. Email your stories to me at smokyzeidel@gmail.com. Write “100 Words” in the subject line.

That’s it! What are you waiting for? Remember, 100 words exactly. Peppermint, jackhammer, and grasshopper. Happy writing!

 

 

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It’s Not Too Late!

It’s not too late to enter the contest I posted a few days ago where you can win a rare, first edition copy of my first novel, Redeeming Grace. Less than 200 copies of this book were printed before my first publisher went out of business, so this is truly a fabulous prize.

How do I enter this fabulous contest, you may be wondering. It’s simple! All you have to do is buy a copy of my Short Story Collection, Vol. 1, read the six short stories, and answer one question, posted below, about each story. Easy as pie!

I’ve had a few people ask where they can get Short Story Collection, Vol. 1 for Nook or Sony Reader; I’ve added the proper link to Smashwords below, which is where you can go to buy the book in any eBook format.

Here’s how the contest works:

  1. Buy a copy of my Short Story Collection, Vol. 1. The print book is available for $8.95 from Barnes & Noble and Amazon. It is also available for Kindle for $3.95. If you have a Nook, Kobo, Sony Reader, or read your books in pdf form on your computer, you can buy it from Smashwords for $3.99.
  2. Read all six stories. Answer a question about each of the stories:
  • Breakfast at the Laundromat: What time did the clock read?
  • Breathe: Who was Hamlette?
  • Good-bye, Emily Dickinson: What did Emily carry in her shopping cart?
  • In a Flash: What cartoon character was among the doctors when I regained consciousness?
  • Leap: What did the sign at the end of the trail say?
  • Lesser Offenses: What color was the truck?

That’s it! DO NOT POST YOUR ANSWERS HERE ON MY BLOG. Email me your answers to smokyzeidel@gmail.com.

CONTEST DEADLINE: February 26, 2012.

The first person who answers all six questions correctly wins the grand prize: a hard-cover, first edition of Redeeming Grace, original cover art by Kathi AndersonMost people don’t know that before Vanilla Heart Publishing picked up my books, Redeeming Grace (now retitled On the Choptank Shores) was published by another press, Quiet Storm Publishing, that went out of business shortly thereafter. A hardcover, first edition of the book is a rare book indeed, as less than 200 were printed.

Second prize goes to the second person who answers all six questions correctly. Second prize is a FIRST EDITION, paperback copy of The Cabin. 

Third prize is a pdf or other eBook formatted copy of On the Choptank Shores OR The Cabin, winner’s choice.

That’s it! Have fun, and enjoy the stories!

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The Versatile Blogger Award

This is fun—my CyberFriend Kelley Lane (Call Me Bookish) awarded me a Versatile Blogger Award! Apparently, the rules are that I now have to list 7 fun facts about myself that my readers don’t know, and then award 15 other bloggers a Versatile Blogger award. Talk about a great way to give a blog some exposure! Thank you, Kelley!

Seven things. Hmmmm…Okay. Here we go:

  1. I’m obsessed with books about Mary Magdalene, Cleopatra, and about Helen of Troy. Not together, of course. But if a book has been written about one of these fabulous women, I probably have read it. If I haven’t read it, it’s because I haven’t heard of it, so if any of you have read a great book about these three, let me know!
  2. I took piano lessons for twelve years while I was growing up. Flute lessons for ten. Oboe for two. I had to quit playing piccolo in my high school band because it caused hearing loss and tinnitus in my left ear, which didn’t go away for two years.
  3. Even though it nearly claimed my life at the time, and complications have nearly killed me more than a dozen times since, I consider having been struck by lightning a blessing. A gift. My life was headed down the wrong path, and this jolt from above got me traveling in the right direction. Thanks, Baby Cakes.
  4. I have a hard time keeping silent when I see an injustice done, especially when I see people intentionally causing harm to our Mother Earth. I speak out. I clean up. I write about it. I rage about it. But, come to think of it, those of you who know me as the Earth Mage are probably aware of this already. I’m counting it anyway.
  5. My father still visits me frequently, even though he died two and a half years ago. I felt him here with me the entire week before my dog, Chia, died last Sunday. My dad always loved my dogs; he was waiting for Chia, and let me know he was there for her. It comforts me so much to know she’s with him now.
  6. It took me 17 years to get my bachelor’s degree, probably because I tried to major in everything except physics. Now that I know something about physics, I wish I had tried to major in that, too. In the end, I wound up with a psychology degree. This is probably why I ended up a writer. I get distracted easily.
  7. I’m 55 years old and proud to say it. I don’t dye my hair to hide the gray coming in, and I don’t lie about my age. I’ve earned every one of those years, and I’m not going to pretend a single one of them never happened! Not even the year of my lightning accident. I feel sad that so many women fear aging. It so beats the alternative.

Now, for the bloggers I am bestowing the Versatile Blogging Award to:

  1. Malcolm’s Round Table, by Malcolm R. Campbell. His blog is brilliant and thought provoking. I never miss it.
  2. Malcolm’s Book Bits and Notions, also by Malcolm R. Campbell. Malcolm must spend hours every day perusing the Internet, searching for interviews, tips, book reviews, and other news events of interest to writers. He does all this so the rest of us don’t have to. If you don’t already subscribe to this blog, I strongly urge you to do so–you don’t know what you’re missing out on!
  3. Collin Kelley’s Modern Confessional. Collin is a brilliant writer, also, and talented poet as well. His blog is thoughtful and insightful.
  4. Debra Brenegan, Author. Author of one of my favorite books of last year, Shame the Devil, Debra’s blog is food for thought.
  5. Sharon Heath. Author of another of my favorite books of the past year, The History of My Body, Sharon is a Jungian analyst and writes from that perspective.
  6. Patricia Damery. Another Jungian analyst, and author of yet another of my favorite books of the past year, Snakes. Those Jungians sure know how to write!
  7. Bertram’s Blog, by Pat Bertram. Pat does author interviews, posts excerpts, and generally champions other writers on her blogs. She is fun, charming, and seems delighted to make new cyberfriends.
  8. Morgen Bailey. Morgen must be the busiest blogger in the UK. She posts author interviews, excerpts, and has a fun Flash Fiction Friday post–writing for this is a real exercise in editing! Morgen is great.
  9. BilltownBlueLit. This is a not-for-profit organization that promotes literary fiction and champions cross-genre promotion.
  10. April Line Writing. April is the brains behind BilltownBlueLit. This is her personal blog, and she writes on all sorts of subjects. She’s thoughtful, expressive, and, often, funny as all get out.
  11. Jeff Markowitz. Jeff’s the guy who got me into blogging in the first place, when we met at an author’s event years ago.  His sardonic wit will make you laugh out loud, and he writes a pretty good mystery to boot!

Okay, that’s only ten bloggers (eleven blogs; Malcolm has two). I owe all y’all another five. But I’d rather give you ten great blogs than fifteen blogs where some were, in my opinion, more self-promotion than thoughtful discussion. I promise, when I come upon five more, I’ll come back and edit this post!

Thank you, Kelley. I would list you here if you hadn’t already won!

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Contest Running Strong! Win Rare First Edition Book!

The contest I posted a few days ago where you can win a rare, first edition copy of my first novel, Redeeming Grace, is running strong! All you have to do is buy a copy of my Short Story Collection, Vol. 1, read the six short stories, and answer one question, posted below, about each story. Easy as pie!

I’ve had a few people ask where they can get Short Story Collection, Vol. 1 for Nook or Sony Reader; I’ve added the proper link to Smashwords below, which is where you can go to buy the book in any eBook format.

Here’s how the contest works:

  1. Buy a copy of my Short Story Collection, Vol. 1. The print book is available for $8.95 from Barnes & Noble and Amazon. It is also available for Kindle for $3.95. If you have a Nook, Kobo, Sony Reader, or read your books in pdf form on your computer, you can buy it from Smashwords for $3.99.
  2. Read all six stories. Answer a question about each of the stories:
  • Breakfast at the Laundromat: What time did the clock read?
  • Breathe: Who was Hamlette?
  • Good-bye, Emily Dickinson: What did Emily carry in her shopping cart?
  • In a Flash: What cartoon character was among the doctors when I regained consciousness?
  • Leap: What did the sign at the end of the trail say?
  • Lesser Offenses: What color was the truck?

That’s it! DO NOT POST YOUR ANSWERS HERE ON MY BLOG. Email me your answers to smokyzeidel@gmail.com.

CONTEST DEADLINE: February 26, 2012.

The first person who answers all six questions correctly wins the grand prize: a hard-cover, first edition of Redeeming Grace, original cover art by Kathi AndersonMost people don’t know that before Vanilla Heart Publishing picked up my books, Redeeming Grace (now retitled On the Choptank Shores) was published by another press, Quiet Storm Publishing, that went out of business shortly thereafter. A hardcover, first edition of the book is a rare book indeed, as less than 200 were printed.

Second prize goes to the second person who answers all six questions correctly. Second prize is a FIRST EDITION, paperback copy of The Cabin. 

Third prize is a pdf or other eBook formatted copy of On the Choptank Shores OR The Cabin, winner’s choice.

That’s it! Have fun, and enjoy the stories!

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Win a Rare First Edition Copy of Redeeming Grace

I’ve always wanted to do a contest–they seem all the rage these days. So here is mine, with some pretty sweet prizes, including a FIRST EDITION, hard-backed copy of my first novel, Redeeming Grace.

Here’s what you have to do:

  1. Buy a copy of my Short Story Collection, Vol. 1. The print book is available for $8.95 from Barnes & Noble and Amazon. It is also available for Kindle  for $3.95. If you have a Nook, Kobo, Sony Reader, or read your books in pdf form on your computer, you can buy it from Smashwords for $3.99.
  2. Read all six stories.Answer a question about each of the stories:
  • Breakfast at the Laundromat: What time did the clock read?
  • Breathe: Who was Hamlette?
  • Good-bye, Emily Dickinson: What did Emily carry in her shopping cart?
  • In a Flash: What cartoon character was among the doctors when I regained consciousness?
  • Leap: What did the sign at the end of the trail say?
  • Lesser Offenses: What color was the truck?

That’s it! DO NOT POST YOUR ANSWERS HERE ON MY BLOG. Email me your answers to smokyzeidel@gmail.com.

CONTEST DEADLINE: February 26, 2012, one month from today.

The first person who answers all six questions correctly wins the grand prize: a hard-cover, first edition of Redeeming Grace. Most people don’t know that before Vanilla Heart Publishing picked up my books, Redeeming Grace (now retitled On the Choptank Shores) was published by another press that went out of business shortly thereafter. A hardcover, first edition of the book is a rare book indeed, as less than 200 were printed.

Second prize goes to the second person who answers all six questions correctly. Second prize is a FIRST EDITION, paperback copy of The Cabin. 

Third prize is a pdf or other eBook formatted copy of On the Choptank Shores OR The Cabin, winner’s choice.

That’s it! Have fun, and enjoy the stories!

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